Our feedback from rough cut 2:
*Your
titles are ALL in the wrong order – look at your research – Produced by does
not come at the start
* Is
that font appropriate?
*Consider
placing of titles – the ones in the centre of the screen are not following
institutional conventions
*The
jump cuts when he goes out of the door are not great
The ECU of the eyes crying does not work – it needs to be longer, it looks like he is sleepy.
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Uploaded by Jade Jacqueline Flack - 8309
Created by Jade Jacqueline Flack - 8309 and Joseph Anderson-Luck - 8905
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